Thursday, November 14, 2013

Apparitions of Nights

                                                                                     Attribution:  Jeffery Pfau
Image: The Stonehenge at Sunset
Source: Wikimedia Commons (here)

ghosts of the ancients
cast their towering shadows
on the holy ground                        -  Patricia
lone concrete apparitions
seems full of life and fervor

ghosts of the ancients
cast their towering shadows
on the holy ground                        -  Patricia
man made with invisible
hands sustaining its influence

ghosts of the ancients
cast their towering shadows
on the holy ground                       -  Patricia
holding out but quietly
a wonder of time and space

Written for Chev's CARPE DIEM Tan Renga Challenge of
month #XIV with Patricia's 'ghosts of the ancients' haiku
featuring the Stonehenge

11 comments:

  1. the second one def resonated the most with me hank...

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  2. Man made, good way to look at them too

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  3. the second one is my favourite

    much love...

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  4. Hank -- nice trio. The 2nd one is my favorite one as well!

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  5. Indeed... the second one.. really stands out.

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  6. I'm partial to #3.
    Very nice set verses...difficult prompt for me.
    Peace
    Siggi

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  7. A wonderful trio of completed Tan Renga Hank, very unique takes, but that second is my favorite .... very well done.

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  8. i enjoyed all three sets, Hank. thank you.

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  9. a wonder of time and space
    so many things in nature to wonder about..we ignorant creatures.. :)

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